I feel that a majority of the negitive views I have of fraternities and sororities are mainly due to what I see in the media, primarily movies. This is why I'm making a video using clips from movies I have seen that have affected my views of Greek Life. I will also be using picture and my Tweets to make the video more personalized. I think I might also add some voice overs rather than using a large amount of text to tell the "story". It's sort of interesting to see what different movies have affected my views and how they have affected it.
I just watched your "TinyPic" video for your draft 2 and it was very interesting and really provided a digital insight into your twitterive process. I like how you used "stereotypical" clips from movies that went along with your tweets that all portrayed how sororities/fraternities are typically viewed. You in-scene narrative was very detailed. I especially like certain detail about the "burnt smelled high quality coffee". When you use detail like that, it draws the reader in by using vivid description that appeals to the senses, which I'm a huge fan of. I like your style of writing, and I feel as if we have similar writing styles. Maybe in your third draft you an incorporate more of your controlling value within your narrative and what drove you to rush a fraternity. Great job so far and I can't wait to see your final product!